Postcard Fiction #2 Miss Communications

Posted on March 20, 2012 by ltownsdin

Choosing wrong words

She sends a text, attempting

To bolster, encourage.

A mistake

To assume a problem

Where there was none.

She falters

But no offense is taken.

Released from the pressure,

Of manager of the universe,

She takes a walk on the river.

7 thoughts on “Postcard Fiction #2 Miss Communications”

deanjbaker on March 20, 2012 at 9:26 am said:

very nicely done, and with a surprise ending

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ltownsdin on March 20, 2012 at 9:47 am said:

Thank you! It’s my second attempt at postcard fiction. I’m still working on the formatting.

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gary on March 20, 2012 at 9:58 am said:

nice. i could say more but i know too much.

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Janet on March 20, 2012 at 10:42 am said:

I love the title you choose. It’s perfect.

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- ltownsdin on March 20, 2012 at 10:49 am said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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Julie Williams on March 20, 2012 at 1:52 pm said:

Love it! And I especially like the last line.

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Ruminating Merlin on March 20, 2012 at 7:38 pm said:

I’ve not heard of postcard fiction until I read your blog. Great piece! I admire the depth of story you achieved in so few words.

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