Choosing wrong words
She sends a text, attempting
To bolster, encourage.
A mistake
To assume a problem
Where there was none.
She falters
But no offense is taken.
Released from the pressure,
Of manager of the universe,
She takes a walk on the river.
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very nicely done, and with a surprise ending
Thank you! It’s my second attempt at postcard fiction. I’m still working on the formatting.
nice. i could say more but i know too much.
I love the title you choose. It’s perfect.
Thank you!
Love it! And I especially like the last line.
I’ve not heard of postcard fiction until I read your blog. Great piece! I admire the depth of story you achieved in so few words.